Not bad for your first project. but room for improvement i'd like to see what you can do with more practice.

i did the idea of the game. i think you should of tried to bring another animator in on the project if the animations were better i would have gone five stars.

sweet

The good and the bad. I like the music and i think its a good rock instrumental. however, i think your vocals need a bit of work. I won't say the song is bad but i think the vocals are pulling it down from what is could be a bit. but that's just my opinion. My suggestion would be to do some voice training just to ge better control but ultimately i enjoy the music and just figured i would also critique just to give you some tips on things you could work on. keep rocking and ill check out your channel.

apparently im late finding this one but regardless you all are quite impressive. ill have to see if youve done others ive missed, this was like 5 years ago lol.

if i did know i was in the newgrounds are portal i might have believed that was a photograph. dig your work keep it up