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The good and the bad. I like the music and i think its a good rock instrumental. however, i think your vocals need a bit of work. I won't say the song is bad but i think the vocals are pulling it down from what is could be a bit. but that's just my opinion. My suggestion would be to do some voice training just to ge better control but ultimately i enjoy the music and just figured i would also critique just to give you some tips on things you could work on. keep rocking and ill check out your channel.

Tritus responds:

well i know i suck at singing... but there is nobody to help me :( <foreveralove> so im TRYING my best :/ by playing every single instrument and also singing... thanks for listening :)

apparently im late finding this one but regardless you all are quite impressive. ill have to see if youve done others ive missed, this was like 5 years ago lol.

the song as a whole is good, my critics and praises: the intro seems a bit generic. too many songs on here seem to start the same way. however, that said i could cruise around to this. its kinda of catchy. Like sorohanro said i think some of the sounds need tweaking as far as volume. but if this is your first project in a while i'd say its good. Work on some more refine your sound a bit love to see what you can come up with.

ToxInjection responds:

Thanks for the review, man!

I know the intro can come off as a bit generic. It's mainly because I don't dabble a whole lot in house (up until now that is, as this is the second house song I've made), and I'm going a bit slow in stepping out of my shell in this genre. I'm feeling a lot more confident in it now though!

Yeah, the mixing is definitely becoming a real issue. Damn myself, damaging my hearing! Even if it doesn't sound too loud to me, it probably actually is too loud. I'll keep it in mind next time I'm mixing the volumes.

no joke. diggin the hell out of this right now. i think my only tip or input is maybe some tweaks to the drops. like 0:23 If i could feel that one and any other drop a bit more. and i think in the 1:30's to 1:40's ish is alittle repetetive. but even without those changes it this is one of the better dance or electronic songs ive heard on here. kick arse. gonna check out more.

Synthapse responds:

thanks bro!

i think this could be a good song. the only drawbacks i dont think are youre fault maybe just need a better area to record.

MyApologies responds:

Yea. I have the worst crap to record with. Just Audacity and a really crappy mic. I had to sing in my closest haha That's why I'm hoping my band picks it up. Our drummer has some really nice recording equipment.

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