The good and the bad. I like the music and i think its a good rock instrumental. however, i think your vocals need a bit of work. I won't say the song is bad but i think the vocals are pulling it down from what is could be a bit. but that's just my opinion. My suggestion would be to do some voice training just to ge better control but ultimately i enjoy the music and just figured i would also critique just to give you some tips on things you could work on. keep rocking and ill check out your channel.
well i know i suck at singing... but there is nobody to help me :( <foreveralove> so im TRYING my best :/ by playing every single instrument and also singing... thanks for listening :)
apparently im late finding this one but regardless you all are quite impressive. ill have to see if youve done others ive missed, this was like 5 years ago lol.
I love most of Avicii's work, As for the remix i dig it, i feel like some of the song feels softened which just seems weird but not necessarily bad. As a whole i enjoyed your remix. ill check out your channel and see what else you've worked on.
the song as a whole is good, my critics and praises: the intro seems a bit generic. too many songs on here seem to start the same way. however, that said i could cruise around to this. its kinda of catchy. Like sorohanro said i think some of the sounds need tweaking as far as volume. but if this is your first project in a while i'd say its good. Work on some more refine your sound a bit love to see what you can come up with.
Thanks for the review, man!
I know the intro can come off as a bit generic. It's mainly because I don't dabble a whole lot in house (up until now that is, as this is the second house song I've made), and I'm going a bit slow in stepping out of my shell in this genre. I'm feeling a lot more confident in it now though!
Yeah, the mixing is definitely becoming a real issue. Damn myself, damaging my hearing! Even if it doesn't sound too loud to me, it probably actually is too loud. I'll keep it in mind next time I'm mixing the volumes.
I'd agree with BlueOceans for the most part. song does sound alot less flat than most submissions in the House genre. i wouldn't go as far as to say your mixing is bad but rather needs some tweaking or practice but i kinda like the dirtiness as i call it. bad sounds harsh. but for all intents and purposes i like it. I'd like to hear some of your other or future work.
Its kind of mellow for my taste in house, but its still good. Lo,oking forward to seeing the finished product. or hearing i guess =P.
thank you =)
I dig this one, i feel it could use a heavier drop but that may just be my speakers. Good work either way.
thanks. Kinda more of a groovy track than heavy, but i know whatcha mean. thanks for listening.
Its a pretty good song, im just not sure it's house its much more techno sounding.
no joke. diggin the hell out of this right now. i think my only tip or input is maybe some tweaks to the drops. like 0:23 If i could feel that one and any other drop a bit more. and i think in the 1:30's to 1:40's ish is alittle repetetive. but even without those changes it this is one of the better dance or electronic songs ive heard on here. kick arse. gonna check out more.
i think this could be a good song. the only drawbacks i dont think are youre fault maybe just need a better area to record.
Yea. I have the worst crap to record with. Just Audacity and a really crappy mic. I had to sing in my closest haha That's why I'm hoping my band picks it up. Our drummer has some really nice recording equipment.
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